BOOM! J
I sat up. No, it wasn’t morning yet. BOOM! I saw a flash of
light pour into the room and disappear again like a giant camera. Then I heard
a rumbling sound. It sounded like a grumpy mum telling someone off.
Then I heard a sort of whimpering sound coming from the bed
below me. “Roxy?” I called into the darkness. “Never mind,” I thought. “She must
have fallen asleep again.”
I heard the rain parachuting onto the roof. “Sounds more like
hail” I thought. I was feeling so tired by then, I just couldn’t keep my eyes
open.
When the rain (or hail) had died down, the wind started up,
growling like a wolf. It sounded like a tornado, (in the morning I realised
that it couldn’t have been one). Finally, the wind died down and I could sleep
in peace. By K8y!!! J
Nice descriptive writingt K8y!!! :)You're awesome by the way!!!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your piece of writing , I especially like your use of language to describe and compare things!!
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