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Sunday, June 24, 2012

My Story Starter. (Chloe the awesome)

Write a funny story about a stubborn avocado who wants to be a lemonade seller. There was once a stubborn avocado who wanted a business as a lemonade seller. It all started when Ducky the avocado was playing tag with his little flea friend called Dipsy. "Tag, you're it dipsy" Cried Ducky. Dipsy did nothing. Fleas can't talk in this world, only avocados. Ducky held Dipsy and squashed him by mistake. Ducky cried immediately and casually flicked the dead flea out the window. One day Ducky felt bored, I mean what would ann avocado do all day? Play rugby? So Ducky decided to play rugby but it was boring, as usual. "I will be a professional lemonade seller one day" He thought. The next day he put up a lemonade stand and noticed something. "Where is the lemonade? Oh well I will sell nothing" He thought that it would be a great idea, to sell nothing but still get the money. (WARNING: This is very dumb. It can effect cleverness) As Ducky was selling...well, nothing really, he felt bored so he used a lit candal and lit it on the cardboard piece of paper on the lemonade stand. POOF. A flash of flames started to burn the lemonade stand. "Oooooh, pretty!" Ducky cried. A man came and said, "Um...excuse me avocado?" "The names Ducky" Said Ducky angrily. "Whatever, but your lemonade stand is on fire" "It's not on fire" Said Ducky as he turned around. "Oh, it is on fire"Ducky cried casually. After that he started screaming mummy. "MUMMY MUMMY! MY LEMONADE STAND IS ON FIRE!" And that was the story of Ducky the stubborn avocado. By the most awesomest person in Room 11. Chloe Williams of course. I like cheese! But not the cheese on lasagna.

6 comments:

  1. sally [courtneys mum]June 25, 2012 at 11:11 AM

    love it chloe, awesome little story, I can see why you and courtney get on so well haha.;p

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  2. Great Chloe Weird but great!

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  3. It is tooo long to read.Looks great though. Roneta

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  4. WOW Cola I had just read that and oh my god that is a very great story well done Cola
    Bye the way (Cheese)

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